Monday, December 11, 2017

Bull Chasing

This post is little different. This time I'm posting a story written by my 9 years old son. Please read it.

Love




“Cairo, follow me” Dell whispered. ”Why should I, because you found a mermaid in your backyard like it was last month or you found a piece of gold in your back yard like it was last time. The gold was really a piece of paper” Cairo said in an angry voice. ”No, just follow me” Dell replied.They walked through the dry land and through the town until they came to a fenced area. ”Over here” Dell said. All of a sudden Cairo tripped over a rock and fell in the fenced area.”What are you doing” Dell asked anxiously. ”I don’t know but there’s one thing I do know, look!” Cairo screamed. Dell looked up.There was a bull running right towards them. ”Run!”Dell screamed ”And what I mean is you run” Dell said. Cairo ran as fast as he could. The bull was making a cloud of dust behind it. Cairo was running faster than a Roadrunner. The bull all most got him a little with his sharp horns.“Yoww!” Cairo yelped. He ran towards the gate. When he reached the gate he opened it and headed for town. “Hang on” Dell yelled as he ran for the bull. Now Cairo and Dell were being chased by what turned out to be a bull. As they entered town a few town folks were also being chased by the bull. “Hey, I have an idea,head for the church, it’s red” Dell suggested. “Sure, anything to stop the bull from chasing us” Cairo said. Finally they reach the church. “On three we jump to the side” Dell said tiredly. “One Two  Three!” the Dell screamed. The two jumped aside. The bull crashed into the church just as planned. “High five” the two yelled. The church was rebuilt in 3 days. After a few days a knock came on Cairo’s door. Cairo opened the door and guess who was there? Dell. “Follow me” Dell said. “oh boy, here we go again” Cairo said. And so they went.

25 comments:

Carol said...

I love it!

Anonymous said...

such a wonderful story! very talented boy!!!

Marie Smith said...

Lol. Love it. Great use of dialogue to tell a story!

Prunella Pepperpot said...

Great story by your Son! When I read "There was a knock on the door" I expected them to be presented with a huge bill for the Church! Please say "hi" to your son and I wish him a very Merry Christmas :)

Stephanie said...

It looks like your son might grow up to be a writer {{smiles}} He did a wonderful job!

Hugs to you, friend!

Mac n' Janet said...

What a wonderful imagination your son has.

♥ Łucja-Maria ♥ said...

Krishna!
A beautiful story.
Congratulations, you have a fantastic son.
Greetings from cold Poland.
Lucja

Margaret D said...

Beautiful from the mind of your 9 year old :)

Gina said...

What an excellent story! Cairo & Dell are quite an adventurous pair. You should be very proud of your son, he did a wonderful job on this story!

Magic Love Crow said...

Great story! Great imagination!! Big Hugs!

Lisa said...

Wow!! What an amazing imagination your son has!! He did a fabulous job!! He has writing in his future!! What a fun story of Cario and Dell :) Have a great day!! Big hugs :)

Lisa
A Mermaid's Crafts

JoJo said...

Great story! I love it! I hope he got an A!

Reckless diary by Anya Dryagina said...

Great story! Really interesting!
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Nancy Chan said...

A great story and very entertaining! He is going to be a great writer one day!

Karen @ Beatrice Euphemie said...

Wonderful story - so creative! Good writing! xx Karen

Miguel Gouveia said...

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Anna said...

There is nothing like the imagination of a child! Great story! Anna x

eileeninmd said...

Hello, your son's story is great. He is talented. Happy Friday, enjoy your weekend!

shwet said...

What a lovely story, at age of 9 he wrote really well. "Follow me". so cute :)
Have a nice weekend.
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Judy at GoldCountryCottage said...

Good story. I like how he figured out how the red barn would play into it. Only 9 years old? He's got a future!..Thanks for the visit, Krishna..Merry Christmas..Judy

Celestina Marie said...

Hi Krishna, Your son's story is very creative and beautiful written. He is very talented. Maybe writing is in his future. Thank you for stopping by my once a month post and your kind comment. It was so nice to see you and I appreciate you taking the time to visit. Wishing you a beautiful weekend ahead. xo

FABBY'S LIVING said...

Oh my, your young son has the heart of a writer, he is so talented ! Congratulations to you and to him.
Thank you for your sweet comment.
Merry Christmas.
Fabby

white and vintage said...

Your sun is a very good writer! Lovely story!
Nice greetings,
Christine

NanaDiana said...

What a cute, cute story. He is going to be a storyteller!!! xo Diana

The Joy of Home with Martha Ellen said...

Your son has a great imagination! Good job! ♥

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